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Friday, July 25, 2014
My Review of The Caterpillar a Short Story By Ashlyn Forge
Well first… I was confused, then I was intrigued. Each sentence in the first several pages brought with them into my mind a thousand questions begging to be answered with no hope of being explained. Still... I was intrigued so I read on. I have issues with being thrown directly into a story with no set up to give you some clue about the world in which you just entered; having said that…I couldn’t help but kind of like it this time. There was no waiting for action…the action came right away. In a strange way it almost made me identify with the characters faster than usual, because well what other choice was there… other than to stop reading and I was far too curious for that. The more I read the more I had to read. Then like that, it was over. This short really is short lol. Now I find myself wishing it was a novella length or full length novel. I really did very much like the strange world in which I found myself. This story was quite unlike anything I have ever read. I think what I most loved about the story and the two main characters was the theme of lovers taking turns being vulnerable. Yes I liked this story very much, but it did leave me unsatisfied wanting more lol. I guess as far as complaints go, that is a good one for an author to receive. If you are looking to read something strange and sort of wonderful in its way…you should really consider reading this tale… of a world of races, where the forces of transformation and change are the true rulers of its peoples.
For those who are unfamiliar with my rating system I judge utilizing five quills for short stories, seven for novella length stories, and ten for full length novels.
Having said this, I give this story
4 out of 5 quills
Ashlyn Forge has called four different continents home,
America, Europe, Latin
America, and Asia. Having spent most of her
childhood staying out of trouble in upstate New York,
she now lives in Japan.
She is currently working on her “Toys and Soldiers” series, which is set in a
Sci-Fi Fantasy underground world. The books of the series are released out of
order with the debut (book 1) “In Liam’s Wake” and “From Johann to Tannnenbaum”
released in 2013. Book 2: “Beyond Riley’s Slumber” as well as “The Stuff of
Dreams” and “Erosions” are slated for publication in 2014.